Wednesday, November 16, 2005

my blanket

Sometimes I look you up. You are my nail biting, my pacing. You are the place I burn off excess energy.

Sometimes I think of you when I am trying to sleep. You are my blanket with triangle edges. You taste good when I hold you in my mouth.

One day, like the blanket, the nail biting, the smoking, the eating, the not eating, you too will pass. I will get to an imperceptable place and you will fall away. I will forget why I ever needed you.

6 comments:

Lx said...

that imperceptible, extremely slight, subtle place...is that from your point of view or the other's?

ChapFu said...

i liked the style. slightly reminiscent of the "i am jack's..." in fight club. and i always wonder if i'm glad i got to that "place" or not.

Tzviya said...

BS"D
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Bnos Yisroel (Daughters of Israel) is a group dedicated to discussing issues relating to Judaism, specifically women's issues, proofs of the Torah, jewish law for women, jewish law in general, a bit of Judaism in general, as well as to generally being mechazeik (giving strength/encouragement) to each other. This is the place to ask all those questions about Judaism that you always wanted to ask.

All Jewish women and girls are welcome to join, regardless of their background or beliefs.

Lx said...

Sweet! I'm in.

Rachel said...

If Amp is in so am I.

That "place" is from my point of view, only I don't know I am there until everything has changed.

I don't even know if that makes sense. I haven't seen fight club, but I think you got it Chapfu.

...was out for some drinks

Lx said...

have seen Fight Club.
i see where Chap's going with it.
however, if you get around, you should READ Fight Club. It's a bit more dynamic and less glitzy and edgy and whatever the feck else the film was.